Comments : Where is the One I Love

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is excellent. The use of the questions mixed with the imagery in the form of facts, creates a wonderful theme in this piece. It feels like it not only has part of your true heart in it, but also some of your very soul. The flow is terrific, and the word choice is superb. I love this piece, as usual.

    I hope that you find the answers that you seek. But if my word would count for anything, there really is love for everyone, somewhere, it just takes some looking and patience. Though, I promise you, your dream girl is out there, waiting for you just the same; she really is.