Comments : Forgot How To Smile

  • 14 years ago

    by Hologram

    So many people face that heart-breaking reflection every day.
    You're not the only one,
    It gets easier ..

    Keep on keepin' on.
    Ily <3
    xo

  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww... Wow! I loved this poem... The title caught my eye .. You write about such true feelings and I could feel them in this poem.. I love how the poem started with you analyzing your reflection and also ended the same way.. and I just loved the ending.. it was perfect.

    "So now I sit and watch,
    My reflection try to smile.
    It doesnt work anymore,
    I havent used it in a while. "

    It's sad but it really affected me! I think smiling is a gift, not just to others, but also to ourselves... Hope you are smiling while reading this :)

    Great job with this poem!

  • 14 years ago

    by quiet lullaby

    This is a lovely read.

    Its so sad, and moving. I can't smile, and to be honest i don't even try anymore.

    I have a poem with a similar subject matter, its called, 'everytime is different' if you get a chance you should check it out,
    A stanza from it,
    ~ 'I Can't Cry A Tear,
    ~For Everyone Will Laugh.
    ~You Can't Hear My Screams,
    ~As My Voice Runs Out Of Gas.'

    anyways its not a good as yours,

    well done on a great poem.