OMG....what an ending...they surely deserved,..he got his revenge ..
this was so creative
so freshh..amazing ideas..
I just love how u worded i.
Loved how u eneded it, the last stanza gave me a chill..amazing msg behind this story

Oh man!! What an end!! You write these story
poems so well and I enjoy reading them! Excellent write!

Simply amazing. The final end to it all was outstanding. I have enjoyed this story from start to finish. This last part was enjoyable by seeing that in the very end she still didn't get away with what she had done. Good job and keep writing.

Hey guy's. It was my utmost pleasure to have shared this with you. I am so glad you all enjoyed this, thanks for reading and commenting :-)