Jad?
this is a thought provoking piece !
ur word choice is perfect
and I kind off loved this form.

I wil try to learn it. cause u penned this poem wisely
well done
5/5
title is a gr8 choice btw

You have penned such a deep and emotional
write using this Cinquain form..well done!

I really enjoy this piece, I found it a while back and have been meaning to comment. It is really really well written. For being such a strict format you really wrote well and left me thinking. I also like how the words were able to be simple and still leave a huge impact.

It seems like this style would be difficult to pull off yet at the same time, you make it look so completely effortless.