by Melissa Sep 8, 2010
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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Very interesting piece indeed. I concur with Jad, the metaphors were clear and portrayed your style very nicely. Nice work, keep it up. |
by Jad
Hmm... A very interesting piece. The metaphors were clear in what they portrayed and your style was quit creative. The ideas portrayed in this poem were nice as well as they gave a reader a good view of what was going on. Good job and keep writing. |