A Wind Full of Dreams (Haiku)

by Italian Stallion   Sep 10, 2010


A white bird dances.
Cascading beauty, spreading
Dreams across the wind.

© Copyright 2010 By: Italian Stallion

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Haiku is a Japanese style.
They consist of 3 lines.
Haiku has a strict syllable count of 5, 7, 5.
They are based on nature.
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  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I just love this, the word choice is very poetic and very deep...and purely NATURAL ..
    loved it

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Beautifully written, although the dancing idea is no longer original on this site it fit nicely with the write. Simple yet well done...

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A excellent Haiku in many aspects I believe. The imagery and creativity shows through the lines beautifully and one can see the images that you have portrayed in such few lines. Good job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Well written, enjoyed the read

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