Well written, enjoyed the read

A excellent Haiku in many aspects I believe. The imagery and creativity shows through the lines beautifully and one can see the images that you have portrayed in such few lines. Good job and keep writing.

Beautifully written, although the dancing idea is no longer original on this site it fit nicely with the write. Simple yet well done...

I just love this, the word choice is very poetic and very deep...and purely NATURAL ..
loved it

5/5