Comments : Deadly Chameleon

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Just tell me from where u bring the words u use in ur poems...u have such an amazingw ay ro keep the flow going no matter how long the poem is..

    not forgetting that everything is always related and they never sound off the subject.

    For that brief moment I was there
    enjoying memories,
    of happy times with those I loved,
    singing melodies.

    It past as fast as it had come,
    I had a job to do.
    One by one they felt my pain
    and did not know from who.

    amazing lines...my fav
    5/5
    ANother brilliant poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Just tell me from where u bring the words u use in ur poems...u have such an amazingw ay ro keep the flow going no matter how long the poem is..

    not forgetting that everything is always related and they never sound off the subject.

    For that brief moment I was there
    enjoying memories,
    of happy times with those I loved,
    singing melodies.

    It past as fast as it had come,
    I had a job to do.
    One by one they felt my pain
    and did not know from who.

    amazing lines...my fav
    5/5
    ANother brilliant poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Man..this was a chilling read, it was like watching a movie. An assasin waiting to strike! Liked it!!