Beautiful Mess.

Did you repost this, Temps? I could swear I have read this before, and commented to it also, but lately I comment so much , it is hard to remember all facts.

Anyway, this poem is great, I love how you made the reader see how difficult loving is in the long run, not just at the start when all is peaches and cream.

I tangle myself
into drama,
like seaweed
suppressing water,
it strangles my
mind; truth.

^^
Interesting wording, strong metaphors.

Good work,

5/5 ingrid

I really enjoyed this, short and sweet, but not lacking, the only thing I could say was I am not sure you need "yet" in the second last line. Great job!

I just love this piece! but i have to comment later on , cause it deserves a real analysis..cause am not home now..but had to drop by and at least tell u
that u worded it perfectly

A well done poem once again. Your talent never ceases to amaze me. The great imagery in this poem was very helpful as it gave nice incite to what was happening and also the feelings coming across this poem were very lovely as well. Good job and keep writing.

What a beautifully penned piece. That last stanza was very nicely penned, i loved it! A great ending to this piece. Nicely done, kudos!