Romance on a Horizon

This was creative and as already said had a nice format of which I haven't really seen before. The word choice and imagery that you have painted into your poem is exceedingly great. The emotions you have given in such few lines is really interesting and great.

"Endless.

The ocean dome
is an echo,
balancing beams
from our soul."

My favorite stanza in this poem. This was what I meant by creative as it gave a great metaphor and picture of what you are trying to get across. So once again good job and keep writing.

Interesting format, MaryAnne!

If we rest here
home will collapse
but we belong
like extensions
under sun�s wing.

^^ you need to repair that one word in the last line

Beauty.

Each crash
against the shoreline
is another declaration,
absorbing deeply
into our body.

^^
Absorbed instead of absorbing?
Taken by destiny
we can sail as one,
a travelling lighthouse
restored with love.

^^
this is my favorite part, when we truly love, we can overcome all:)

well done,

5/5 Ingrid