Some very wise words from someone so young. I particularly admired these verses:

We don't look good all the time
Sometimes we appeared to be ugly
But our real beauty is beyond compare
And it does not appear physically

We are not possessions for you to keep
Rather, we are treasures to be cherished
For every girl has a heart
Where love can be unleashed.

Your writing has a maturity beyond your years. Good luck with your writing.

Wow!! This is an awesome, amazing poem!! I loved it!! So deep!! :)

So true, so creative, and so damn right. I hope that a great number of people enjoy this piece as much as I have. I find your voice to be quite strong and clear, yet soft and friendly. The tone was nice, but the word choice was one thing that stunned me the most. Your flow felt like it was spot on. Excellent job.

Message, warmly taken as due. Thanks for making out time to share.