A interesting twist in the poem as I read the second stanza which caught me off guard, nicely done. I felt as if there where many emotions coming off this piece as there was and that for your first stanza you fill it up with feeling of love, joy, happiness, and completion. All of these were strongly felt I thought. Then came the second stanza which gave a twist as I said as the feelings turned to hate, sadness, sorrow, and depression giving the reader both sides of the reflection.

"When she spits venom that burns your heart, rips your rosy world apart,
Her eyes bloodshot right into yours, blinking tears in that hateful way..."

By far this my favorite stanza as it gave a sense of hopelessness for the person being torn down. Once again your great word choice and ideas in this poem made it very unique. Also there was some good imagery in this one. I did not however see anything that really needed any changing. So all in all you did a wonderful job. Good job and keep writing.