This is sweet and innocent and the emotion you so vividly portray, the fear of giving into love, is indeed a scary one..it takes so much courage to go for the one you love with all your heart.

The only remark I have is that you used the word "for" twice and shortly after one another, other than that: sweet innocence:)

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow!! This poem is so beautiful! I loved everything about it! So nicely written! Great job:)

I really loved this one 2 and you can tell everyone else did cuz you have over 5000 veiws girl. ^_^

This.

This poem is a culmination of a slow shift in thinking I've seen through all your poems so far. The shift from passive fearfulness to a determined boldness. As I've mentioned, that boldness and determination is key for a relationship, and although it may not turn out as planned, without it all that remains are doubts and fears, and that will never get anyone anywhere. Better to take a chance to HAVE a chance at a successful relationship, than to take no chance and have NO chance. Very, very good write, possibly my favorite of all of them simply because of the positive change I see in this one. <3