Money. [Senryu]

A very outspoken piece I would have to say. You cut right to the point in this short poem and got your message across with such few words. You have done the hard thing of making your idea clear within three short lines which makes this piece really good. It is true that people often use money as a motivation for doing stuff. Good job and keep writing.

Loved this! I knew from the title your words would strike the cold hard truth. You have pinpointed the issue in today's world, the fact we can be so easily persuaded and motivated by worldly riches.

Wonderful and thoughtful take, a piece that truly speaks in three lines!

God bless.

~MaryAnne

A very interesting poem, with real insight over here. you have spoke MONEY choosing the perfect words.

I loved the whole poem,, truly amazing
5/5