by XoXoBriannaoXoX Sep 14, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
If you would have killed me, it would hurt much less. |
Ouch! It's very touching. You shouldn't have to go through this at such young age. You're too beautiful to be treated this way. |
by iRobbiee
I agree..this was good it was great and realy easy to relate to.. I like it a lot that im gonna read it again... because right now I believe yur poem is gonna get me through what im going through... it was excellent |
by chind
This was a good write, i think you did a great job in expressing your emotions. It is such an easy piece to relate to. Simple, yet lovely, good work! |