I gave you everything

by XoXoBriannaoXoX   Sep 14, 2010


If you would have killed me, it would hurt much less.
The pain your putting me through is so much stress.
I can feel my heart breaking in my chest.
I was so happy, I gave you my everything.
in the end just to be left.

When you see me do you even care.
The person that used to be beautiful, is now a nightmare.
Now every time you look into my eyes.
All I can do is break down and cry.

I wish that things could have worked.
But now I know who you really are.
A coldblooded jerk!

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Ouch! It's very touching. You shouldn't have to go through this at such young age. You're too beautiful to be treated this way.

  • 14 years ago

    by iRobbiee

    I agree..this was good it was great and realy easy to relate to.. I like it a lot that im gonna read it again... because right now I believe yur poem is gonna get me through what im going through... it was excellent

  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    This was a good write, i think you did a great job in expressing your emotions. It is such an easy piece to relate to. Simple, yet lovely, good work!