One of those nights

Any line you have that starts with 'and' or 'so' the word can be removed, it will flow a lot better that way, they are silly fillers that you don't need. Other than that, a nice poem that a lot of us can relate to , I so know what you're talking about!

Such a very sad poem over here, you have penned down one of those poems when you make the reader feel like your letting ur feelings all out..

tho its a free verse I just think some lines would sound a LOT more better, i wont give suggestions but I wil let you knw which I think you can really play more with :

And you hope that someone hears you
So you won't have to lie anymore

The days that you feel
Worthless
Stupid
And all yu want to do is sream.
>>over here nothing to change but I think u missed both the letters o in you and C in scream :)

You just wish it would all
Just go away.]
>>i really can relate to that

But maybe one day
Just one day
You'll wake up from the dream,
It will all get better
>>a very wise ending, and I really like it, but I think you no bet can reword it in a very effective way

in all cases
5/5 for this

This is really a great poem.
i can relate very well to this.
so thank you for writing this lol.
but i really was beautiful.