This is really a great poem. |
by Sunshine
Such a very sad poem over here, you have penned down one of those poems when you make the reader feel like your letting ur feelings all out.. |
Any line you have that starts with 'and' or 'so' the word can be removed, it will flow a lot better that way, they are silly fillers that you don't need. Other than that, a nice poem that a lot of us can relate to , I so know what you're talking about! |