Sorrow(Acrostic)

by Jad   Sep 14, 2010


Singing pain felt inside
Overbearing emotions untold,
Raining thoughts of lies
Remembering our mind holds
Oceans of sadness and feelings
Waking our hearts to cry.

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  • 14 years ago

    by kmx210

    This kind of poem. Bitter. I felt lost and gone. Im sure that was the feeling you were aiming for. You hit it with me perfectly. Great job

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    JAd..omg this is a very sad and bitter poem.
    the wording is perfect..and these few lines revealed so much..something I wonder if i can even do..

    such an amazing piece jad..
    like all ur poems
    5.5

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    As I read this I could picture this with rain..for
    some reason all I could see the sadness within the rain..well done with this acrostic!

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Loved the simple style of this poem yet the intimate ties between each line of written sorrow. I happened to enjoy the depth of the first line, the usage of "signing" was very unique. Beautiful portrayal. Thank you for your comment on my latest piece also. Hope you are well.

    God bless!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Fantastic! I could not think of something better how to describe sorry in few words. Good job on the form and the quality of this piece.

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