I loved it, it was short but expressed sorrow nicely. I wasn't sure however on your first line, are you sure you didn't mean singing? Otherwise nice write!

Fantastic! I could not think of something better how to describe sorry in few words. Good job on the form and the quality of this piece.

Loved the simple style of this poem yet the intimate ties between each line of written sorrow. I happened to enjoy the depth of the first line, the usage of "signing" was very unique. Beautiful portrayal. Thank you for your comment on my latest piece also. Hope you are well.

God bless!

~MaryAnne

As I read this I could picture this with rain..for
some reason all I could see the sadness within the rain..well done with this acrostic!

JAd..omg this is a very sad and bitter poem.
the wording is perfect..and these few lines revealed so much..something I wonder if i can even do..

such an amazing piece jad..
like all ur poems
5.5

This kind of poem. Bitter. I felt lost and gone. Im sure that was the feeling you were aiming for. You hit it with me perfectly. Great job