Repetitions.

by Steven Beesley   Sep 14, 2010


Repetitions,
twenty four seven,
sunrise to sunset,
morning dew to twilight hues.

Umpteen springs and summers,
short lived falls and long long winters
as we retrace our footsteps
over and over again.

From our early beginnings till
the last day that we wake.
We tread in paths so
familiar and circles that we shape,
it's all the same, this journey
that we all make.

(C) Steven Beesley 14th September, 2010

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is a veyr wise piece ..with many profound insights..ur words revealed.

    I just love the word choice and I think you pennd it perfectly..couldnt find anything to moan about,.
    a very gr8 job
    5/5

    Umpteen springs and summers,
    short lived falls and long long winters
    as we retrace our footsteps
    over and over again.

    this part blew me off the hill

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A very true and thoughtprovoking write! There is " no new thing under the sun" I suppose. But hey, we are creatures of habit :)

    A good write !
    Lol, Olwin

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yup..its the same thing day in and day out..like the circle of life. Each day we can try
    and learn something new perhaps...

    "short lived falls and long long winters"

    I like this line. Its like all the good things only
    lasts for a short while..liked the read :)

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