Such a touching piece.
Such sadness. I really like the passion that was put into this piece.

Simply Amazing!

A deep and touching piece. Very captivating. Very well written. I like the lay out and I got a hint of sadness from it. All in all, an excellent piece. You used your words well. 5/5

Danika
xxoxoxx

P.S, my poem Your Essence was dedicated to my great aunt instead of my grandmother, just so your not confused, lol. Thank you for your comment = )

I am now like an asteroid
star-like and shiny
though deadly and unattractive
a threat to his desire
of not to mate for life
like as if Venus and Neptune
would ever synchronized

Do you have any idea of how beautiful and amazing this poem is?
Specially the ending! Touching indeeed... I wish I could nominate poems already... Meeeh!:p
That stanza stood out the most for me, maybe because I really did understand it.. Very well done...

4.5?!!

I have found this one of the deepest free versed poems..this is a heartfelt piece..with so many many sad expressions that you really penned down with a very DEEP imagination.

The things of our natural world that you have connected to your own feelings..gave me a high sense of creativity..!
such as this :

a threat to his desire
of not to mate for life
like as if Venus and Neptune
would ever synchronized

a poem to relate to 100 % ..

my favs:

I am now like an asteroid
star-like and shiny
though deadly and unattractive
>>>such a sorrowful stanza..I saw my self with a broken heart..within these lines

I cannot piece together tomorrow
>>very sad...worded in a very beautiful way!

but one thing is for sure,
real change takes time
>>found this simple and wise!!

I'm just a little not too over you.
>>I did expect such an ending, but your wording was special!!Really Special

5/5

Too little time to heal
yet so much time to dream

^^^^
beautiful lines ...

All I can say is your free flow is amazing and I love your style This is beautiful

Very touching and beautiful!
Crestfallen is such a magical word, indeed!
I love it, a lot!