Apocalyptic Sunrise.

by Courageous Dreamer   Sep 14, 2010


Apocalyptic sunrise -
soft skies of electric blue,
sketch my prophecy
before thine eyes.

tempt me with a lavender kiss,
suspend fate beyond thy horizons-
abet thy soul to succeed,
overcome archaic dreams.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Like the old English here, Temps..in fact I like the whole poem:)

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    Britt already took what I was going to say about the old vocabulary in the poem, it makes it seem more real. I like the title as that really grabs one attention and then as they read the first line, the reader is captivated from line to line in the poem. Also some nice imagery in there as well. Great job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    WOOWWw i love the Lavender kiss expression a LOTtttttt..u got a very poetic wording over here.
    i have loved ur word choice
    and just how u used ur words to ur own side.. kind of mastered it..

    5/5!!

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