WOOWWw i love the Lavender kiss expression a LOTtttttt..u got a very poetic wording over here.
i have loved ur word choice
and just how u used ur words to ur own side.. kind of mastered it..

5/5!!

Britt already took what I was going to say about the old vocabulary in the poem, it makes it seem more real. I like the title as that really grabs one attention and then as they read the first line, the reader is captivated from line to line in the poem. Also some nice imagery in there as well. Great job and keep writing.

Like the old English here, Temps..in fact I like the whole poem:)

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid