I think this is a very special piece.
U had unique linesover here
and some expressions that are really original and new..some that I really loved

your wording was as good as the imagination..another brilliant piece

As we see time again,
things which cannot be seen
will never bend and tend
to always flow as the days go.

ur last lines..am just speechless about that
5/5

Jad, time waits for no man, thanks for sharing this write