Love Bleeds

by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE   Sep 16, 2010


Anger
Fills My Thoughts
My Veins
My Body.
Where You Were
Only Minutes Before
Deep Inside
My Heart Shatters.

Blood
Fills My Thoughts
My Veins
My Body.
Where You Were
Only Minutes Before
Burning Red With Passion
Deceit Showing Through Your Eyes.

Tears
Fills My Thoughts
My Veins
My Body.
Where You Were
Only Days Before.

Fragile Me
Holding On By A Woven Thread
Losing Touch With Reality
And You...
Please Dont Let Me Fall.

Madison Leigh
August 23rd 2010

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  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I love poems with repetition, but you seemed to overdue it a bit with this piece. Realisticly you only had about 5 lines in the poem, I'm not saying it was terrible but you could've done more with this I believe....

  • 14 years ago

    by David Marshall

    Hey this was really good! I really liked the consistancy. It was very simple and to the point. and sometimes thats all you need to express an emotion. very well done!! 5/5!

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