Im begging you!

by XoXoBriannaoXoX   Sep 16, 2010


I really hate you, it's not even a lie.
You hurt me so much, it's killing me inside.
The way you looked at me, I thought was true.
But I guess either way, I got fooled.

You played my heart, like it was a game.
You took my pride, and through it down the drain.
You took my love, and shot it down.
What should I do, when I hit the ground?

Everyone tells me, to cheer up.
But nothing's helping me anymore.
Not even the drugs..
I cant do this anymore.

So please oh please,
I'm begging you to,
quit hurting me!

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  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well I would say that when I was reading this, it doesn't sound like a poem at all, it was much more like a letter to your ex lover. I feel the hurt that he has cause you base on what you've expressed. Though I believe that there is still room for improvement. I would recommend that you read more poets work and study their craft and yeah mold it into your own from there.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Such a herartfelt write.. filled with emotion. You express yourself well & I wish you all the Best dear friend :)
    The second verse is my fav. part...

    "You played myheart, like it was a game.
    You took my pride, and through it down the drain.
    You took my love, and shot it down.
    What should I do, when I hit the ground?"

    Keep penning... :] You have talent :)
    Love the rhyme in your poem.
    Take care....Olwin.

    ".

    Keep penning... Lol, Olwin

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