Down-Under (Haiku)

by Soft Parade   Sep 17, 2010


As The Phoenix Rose Up

Orange Hypnotically Dancing

Perception Melted

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Haiku is a 3-line poem.
It has a syllable structure of 5-7-5.
They are about nature.
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  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Beautifully written, definitely the simple poem I was looking for the first time around, you did a nice job.. hypnotically dancing was okay.. the dancing idea is definitely overused but I think with hypnotically in front it made it different and was less cliche. Nicely done!

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