by Ronald Edwards Sep 17, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
A collaboration of |
by Meena Krish
A very loving and tender poem written by the |
Thank you all for such lovely comments and sentiments. I'll have to start posting more of the lighter poems :-) |
A collab that was smooth as silk and sensual as a summer breeze. Great work done between the two of you making a great team writing as one. |
by Sunshine
OMG...such an amazing collab...the flaw was so easy..and the word choice seemed to have this harmony between the lines u both ppenned down!! |
by Thomas
This poem is beautiful. It flows so smoothly, the rhyming never seems forced, and to be honest, that was my favorite part, that the rhymes worked so well, never making any line feel longer than the next. Well done. |