Interesting how this is in nature. I could feel the emotions of love coming from this piece in every line which made it very nice. The poem had a goof flow from beginning from the start to finish. Good job and keep writing.

Jad, my mistake, I moved it to love poems, thanks for reading and commenting

This poem is beautiful. It flows so smoothly, the rhyming never seems forced, and to be honest, that was my favorite part, that the rhymes worked so well, never making any line feel longer than the next. Well done.

OMG...such an amazing collab...the flaw was so easy..and the word choice seemed to have this harmony between the lines u both ppenned down!!

a very effecting writing
5/5

A collab that was smooth as silk and sensual as a summer breeze. Great work done between the two of you making a great team writing as one.

Thank you all for such lovely comments and sentiments. I'll have to start posting more of the lighter poems :-)

A very loving and tender poem written by the
both of you. It flowed smoothly and the rhymes were perfect. A lovely read :)