It's Hard To Be Tender

Nana this may have just been venting but you have still pulled off an amazing piece here. The sadness evoked with every line that you wrote as you seemingly spilled your heart out onto this piece. The imagery in this poem as well was quit nice as it gave the reader a visual idea of how you feel. Quit unique.

"Thrum the tunes of my crimson heart
for the bitter beats of this shattered love
will throb penitence as blood imparts"

This was my favorite stanza out of all of them as it gave away such sad emotions and one could almost feel this heart beats in each line as you went from line to line. The over all flow was great as you transcended from each line to the next. All in all you have done an excellent job with this poem. Good job and keep writing.

Omggggg nana this was great! I love how you made it repeat like that. You sure are one talented girly. Your words are so powerful and nicely put together. Beautiful yet sad. An amazing piece naza!

I meant "Your" :D

First of all, thank you for the comments, really appreciated.

You're vocabulary and rhyming skills are developing into something astonishing. In my opinion they are ones of those skills that one must have knowledge of in order to write effectively. I can tell by using simple language, you write for your audience and you did excel on that. In my opinion, your poetry always contain those elements that everyone cal relate to. The tone of this piece is soothing yet depressing at the same time probably because of the emotion this piece holds.

I also thought this was a form poetry because of the repetition of some lines or words.