Comments : Return to me

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A great love poem. Talking about either being in love with someone again or as Lostlove1 said a soulmate. Either way the emotions speak for themselves in this piece as you have poured your heart out into every line. Good job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Distance absorbs
    these silhouettes of memories
    becoming a faint mirage
    returning to mere thoughts,
    wants and desires
    of being in love with her once more

    This part says a lot about the affection you have for her, strong and willing. Liked it very much..keep penning :)