Comments : Behold

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    Another great poem about and/or describing love. You seem to easily be able to paint these pieces so beautifully and with great depth. Each line slowly reveals more about your heart as you tell the reader how you feel. Good job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Very nice indeed! THis took me back in time of knights & maidens. Loving, sensual and
    longing are the feelings all wrapped within this write!