Woh.. what a Fantastic write! So descriptive with beautiful images. Can just see the new day dawning as darkness is expelled :)
Excellent I thought... Very Well Done Austin! :]

(esp .liked the last 2 lines of the last stanza.. Amazing! )

Lots of repetitiveness with 'light' but otherwise amazing! I am very impressed, I think this is one of the better poems I've seen from you! Wellll donee!

Jad , excellant write. I was able to imagine the coming of this new day. Well chosen words and flow. Thanks for sharing

Some really unique imagery painted here, I have never heard the sunrise described as a aterfall of light, I was transported to the moon watching the sun light fall down over teh earth when i read that...top quality!!!

I dnt have words to say...Im speechless by r word choice..just speechless..and dont think this is a lame comment..but I really lack the ability to choose a part to comment over..am just facinated by that you have written..

no one write nature better than you Jad..oonly Ingrid write as good..wen its about nature..
but no one else no

this deserves a nomination

Outstanding work, Austin.

This is poetry written in such a way, it is a journey, a little trip that makes you see the wonders of life.

The moon shines forth bright
As an angel in the sky.
Tearing away the darkness into light,
Like separating truths from lies.

^^
I loved the image of the angel. I have a son that looked like a little angel, complete with the red curls and chubby little body, ha ha. I like how you have woven the comparisons into your work.

Great!

5/5 Ingrid

5/5.CONGRATS.
A poem with a beautiful imagery.The moon's act is splendid....wow! Keep the good work going.God bless.

Amazing rhyme scheme imagery and natural preception well delivered

THis is written so beautifully..like a blossoming of a flower! I like the way the start of the verse opened slowly painting a
nice introduction to a new season...lovely read! Congrats on the win!!

Nice word flow and the imagery is too.

I really loved this poem , it was very descriptive and flowed really nicely. ^_^

Wow... beautiful poem! I love the vivid imagery you've created .. It made me envision it and I really enjoyed it. Congratulations on the win!
Your poem reminded me of my poem "Rise, Rise, Oh Sun" The meaning seems similar. Great job!

I could only hope to become such a beautiful poet. This piece, as said before, is absolutely amazing. It captivated me, and I seemed to flow with the words. Truly exquisite. You deserved the win. :)

The way you made this poem so picturesque is amazing! The comparison of colors to the lives of people and the contrast of light and dark to lies most definetly makes this poem stand out from ordinary poetry! Great work.

Wow , such a beautiful poem Austin , & so eloquently written. I enjoyed reading it over & over 5/5 ...Jim

Wow. I can TOTALLY see why this won =)

5/5

GREAT JOB! =D! I LOVED IT!

WHOA this was awesome. great work!

This poem is absolutely incredible my friend! Your rhyme and choice of word is uncanny and brilliant! I can envision each stanza's description within my mind's eye and it is absolutely beautiful.

5/5

Keep up the good work!

Beautiful words that create a beautiful image!