Let love flow thru... Yes to love and being loved is wonderful. When you experience the magic of love, only then you see that this world can be better. The thing about is is that, it cannot be found where it does not exist, but when you heart find the right one, it just leap in a different way. I really enjoyed this poem, it gives vivid imagery. Very well done.

I liked the repetivness of the last line in every stanza. Once again your emotions are written in every verse. Portraying what you feel about this special person. One could almost feel what was happening in parts of your poem as your imagery increased for the better. Good job and keep writing.

Such a very deep poem...what i llove about ur poetry..is that ur emotions always take place number one..then u play with words to give us brilliant images..

cant be more impressed and touched!

Our arms held on tight
not in fear of losing each other,
for there was no reason to run.
^^^^^^^^
makes a lot of sense..many wlll relate to these lines..
bravo

This human boundary of skin
prevented the union of our souls,
^^^very poetic

sharing that moment, pulled us together.
It was then when I knew.
^^^^^^^^really my fav part.fav stanza
and i love the idea of repeating that line..which matched with the title

5/5!

"To love and be loved"

That is what we all crave for in a relationship,
to be love and be loved and that creates a wonderful feeling..a tender read :)

Very good.

Very good.

It must be great to look back upon how it all started beteen you and your significant other this way..so many memories of a life time together, no doubt:)

Well done, a very loving dedication.

5/5 Ingrid