Comments : The Same Moon Shadows

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Such ana amazing collab..both of ur thoughts had a very special harmony..u two seem like to read each others thoughts...I cant tell it was written by diff poets..if it wasnt mentioned..
    every thing was related..well done

    Or in summers warmth
    under sterling stars,
    this nighttime wandering
    is it ours?

    Do you see the same moon as I
    that lies, in fiery skies
    among palettes red
    and wades away, in winters chill
    with dreams of me, still?
    ^^^
    my favs
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Reading this put a smile on my face; it was like hearing 2 people sing a duet..so soft and beautifully tender..nicely penned!

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A wonderful collab with many ideas running across the poem. Varied emotions are also scattered on this piece as one has to think that when they look at the moon is their other half looking at the moon as well. Good job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Meena couldn't have said it better. It truly has a melody of sorts. A great piece of work.