Comments : Remainders Of The Day

  • 14 years ago

    by Jessie

    "The little girl who wished on stars
    And reveled in her dreams
    Before they turned to sleepless nights
    Filled with chilling screams"

    This was my favourite part.

    Very good read, felt like I was in the poem, Thank you

  • 14 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Thoughts of running far away
    Until one day I went
    Left behind the love I knew
    For fear of what it meant
    ^
    Adored that stanze! Very well done,amazing rhyming and amazing flow
    Love how sincere this poem is,u can tell it came from deep with in,despite its simple diction.
    *well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    Your poems always hold such wonderful flow Jenn!

    When we face up to all we've seen
    Reconciled the pains
    It won't matter where we live
    As long as love remains
    ^^^
    Love this ending stanza.

    Wonderful flow and leaves the reader much to think about.
    Great read Jenn