by Jad
Hmmm... I would say that you have described Paranoia very well and you did an excellent job in the overall idea of what you got across in the poem. I thought though that it didn't flow at parts for some odd reason which could just mean I need to read it more but that's what I got. Anyway you had a good word choice in this poem as well as a overall great idea of what to write about. Good job and keep writing. |
Your language placement certainly captured well some of the jagged, and colorful, edges of that |