Of me to say

by Ronald Edwards   Sep 21, 2010


Is it indifference to how I feel
or has lack of interest become
the stand in and the
stage has called
for a replacement?

I dont know what it is
of me to say.

Has the once mutual feeling
of enjoyment while together
been forgotten or
did uncomfortable time apart
find its way in?

I dont know what it is
of me to say.

Memories of sharing
and just being
will never be forgotten
yet times of yesterday are gone
and today is our reality.

I dont know what it is
of me to say.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is very profound..a really deep writing..and I just LOVE the wording..the insights and the words you chose..

    this is a really thought provoking piece..Ronald your poetry always hold msgs..
    i love it!

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I really liked the layout of your poem, a tad different then the same ole form. Great theme enjoyable read.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A very thought provoking piece as one has to think carefully all over these emotions you have penned in this poem. You posed interesting questions that are hard o answer but you should know what to do. Good job and keep writing.

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