A very thought provoking piece as one has to think carefully all over these emotions you have penned in this poem. You posed interesting questions that are hard o answer but you should know what to do. Good job and keep writing.

I really liked the layout of your poem, a tad different then the same ole form. Great theme enjoyable read.

This is very profound..a really deep writing..and I just LOVE the wording..the insights and the words you chose..

this is a really thought provoking piece..Ronald your poetry always hold msgs..
i love it!

5/5