Comments : Struck Down by Zeus (Tanka)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    For such a short form I was surprised to see the big words, I would have liked or anticipated something much more simple to understand... It was an interesting write though, it's nice discovering new words and reading about different things... nicely done

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Such a very deep poem...u have indeed used big words but in a veryyyyyyyyy
    beautiful way.
    I just LOVE it..i was astonished by the word choice and the feelings it gave me!

    well done
    u never fail to surprise me
    5/5