A Triolet?!.. I love it, I love it, I LOVE IT!! HaHa.

Austin... youre full of surprises :) A MARVELOUS poem. Bravo...

..... I love the repeating line " As we stand in awe wonder" :)

Your work reminds me a lot of my own . No wonder I like it hahahaha. All kidding aside great works going on in your head

Jad all these fancy poem configs are not to my taste yet this is perhaps one of the best triolets I have read. So instead of puting it down the toilet I gave it an excellent 5/5
Ray S