Sooo emotional ... i love ur piece aloot , great job Megan
5/5

Mmm I agree that it's emotional and spoke your feelings clearly but if you want me to be honest not lie at you, u need to organize it in another way to be a poem for real

cuzthis is more like a letter..knw wat I mean?

I like this. It's not forced nor does it have to be changed so I disagree with Brillant aka Sunshine. Just write how you want to write, and don't let anyone tell you any different.

I love my mum too, and although we argue she'll always be my best friend.

Great poem, please write more.

This is in return from your comment on my poem.

It's hard to put to words the feelings we have, especially when it's about someone as special as your mother. I commend your courage and can relate to your pain. When my parents divorced it was hard for me and my mom to communicate. We still struggle but we find time when we can to remind eachother how much we love eachother.

5/5 .