If

by Ronald Edwards   Sep 22, 2010


If I give my heart to you will you hold it true
If I say I want you will you say that you do too

If I show you all I am inside will you accept me for whats there
If I tell you all there is to tell will you listen and really care

Do you understand that Im just a man thats in love with you

If I hold your hand will you never let mine go
If I reach for you from time to time well you never tell me no

If I see us down the road will you be standing next to me
If I offer all I have to give will you take it sparingly

Do you understand that Im just a man thats in love with you

If I say you are my soul mate will our spirits intertwine
If I say I am afraid will you ease me down the line

If I cant find reality will you lend me yours in lieu
If I get lost along the way will you guide me back to you

Do you understand that Im just a man thats in love with you

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Very emotionall..and deep..i love it for how simple it is..reminds me of valentines cards ..
    I love the repetition of that line..the love u revealed..and the emotions u showed..loved it all.

    If reach for you from time to time well you never tell me no

    ^^^^ u need to add I ? after If..right?
    and I wish u can add the missing apostrophes ...

    another gr8 work..like prince charming
    5/5
    :P

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    Interesting write, I like how you seem to be asking questions in every line and then justified why you did those things. The emotions of love were quite evident throughout this piece. Good job and keep writing.

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