Interesting write, I like how you seem to be asking questions in every line and then justified why you did those things. The emotions of love were quite evident throughout this piece. Good job and keep writing.

Very emotionall..and deep..i love it for how simple it is..reminds me of valentines cards ..
I love the repetition of that line..the love u revealed..and the emotions u showed..loved it all.

If reach for you from time to time well you never tell me no

^^^^ u need to add I ? after If..right?
and I wish u can add the missing apostrophes ...

another gr8 work..like prince charming
5/5
:P