Us

by Raven   Sep 22, 2010


Our friendship began when
one of mine ended.
It wasn't until then
that i found my true friend.

Our relationship grew stronger
when we decided to date boys.
Even then we grew fonder
of each other than our new toys.

After your horrible break up
I was there for you
When the hands of times stopped
you were there fore me.

We grew closer within that week
when we explored the world around us.
"With every boy we meet
shall never separate us"

We made some bad choices
and learned from our punishment.
It was then we heard the voices
telling us that life was meant to be cherished.

We've shared more with each other
than anyone else in our circle.
We both knew never to bother
for one of them not to say anything would be a miracle.

We've had our share of fights
but none like this one before.
Where you hurt me with so much might,
that I had to choose the door.

You said so many things that night
with so much hate in your eyes.
That I couldn't even began to fight
because I don't like to start lies.

I left that night with eyes full of tears
and a mind in complete shock
All of my worst fears
had come to the top.

I don't know where to begin
nor do I know if this is the end.
But I know this is not how a friend
treats another friend.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    The depth that I witnessed in 'GANGS' wasn't there, which was a shame, because 'GANGS' was a great piece of writing. I think what didn't work for me personally, was the stilted flow. The rhymes was also not very strong in places. Saying that, though, your ending was the strongest part, and that's important.

    Brad

    P.S. Please comment and vote on every poem that you read.