My wounded heart

Ahaha, there's room somewhere in here for a corny, possibly charming joke, but I'll stick to the critiques. xD

Although it has a sad undertone to it, there's also a hopefulness in this poem, a "faith", if you will. Faith is the assured expectation of things not yet beheld. It seems that this "man" is no longer an "if", but a "when", which also shows a trust in Jehovah to provide what you know you need. Very enjoyable to read. *nod*

Awwwww.... I loved this poem!! It's sooo deep and emotional... It really made me feel the pain and I can relate! I love the idea of wanting your heart to be stitched again, by someone who is capable of doing that... Such a moving piece. Some parts of your poem reminded me of my poem "My Dark Room."
Great job with this poem! Keep writing beautifully :)

This was really awesome , and I loved the line about bleeding is all I've ever known. that was such a good line nice write ^_^