This was really awesome , and I loved the line about bleeding is all I've ever known. that was such a good line nice write ^_^ |
Awwwww.... I loved this poem!! It's sooo deep and emotional... It really made me feel the pain and I can relate! I love the idea of wanting your heart to be stitched again, by someone who is capable of doing that... Such a moving piece. Some parts of your poem reminded me of my poem "My Dark Room." |
by RynZelara
Ahaha, there's room somewhere in here for a corny, possibly charming joke, but I'll stick to the critiques. xD |