by Ronald Edwards Sep 23, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Come swim in my soul, |
by Meena Krish
An invite to love and all the comforts that comes with it..sweet little write :) |
It sounds like the perfect place for a lady to be, safe and warm with someone that cares. Feelings explode, simply and silently in this poem. Good job |
by Jad
A standard love poem. Many feelings of love scattered across the few lines you have written for us to read. The message was quick ans short and to the point. Good job and keep writing. |