by Jad
A standard love poem. Many feelings of love scattered across the few lines you have written for us to read. The message was quick ans short and to the point. Good job and keep writing. |
It sounds like the perfect place for a lady to be, safe and warm with someone that cares. Feelings explode, simply and silently in this poem. Good job |
by Meena Krish
An invite to love and all the comforts that comes with it..sweet little write :) |