Interesting to say the least. This was written in a different way then most of your poems but you still have done an excellent job with it. The hidden emotions of love and joy beat in every line and with a good flow from start to finish. Many ideas were portrayed here and you spoke truly from your heart with this piece. Good job and keep writing.

WOW...RONALD...u blew me off...

maybe you will see
that my desire is not so much of flesh,
as the longing to slip behind
the walls in your heart,

my god..very profound u know...its always whats behind the actions we do in love..which we seek..it in the meaning not in the words..the picture not the frame..

... thoughtfulness ....
forever loving this one..
5/5